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> Outcast, Warning: Way more suicidal
Makuna
 Posted: Aug 25 2009, 12:06 PM
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Outcast

There's no escaping the box I'm in
I don't wanna go through this again
Over and over as if there's no end
Never had a place with a friend

Trying to find out what's wrong with me
But showing the greatest apathy
Never finding the place I fit
Sick and tired of all this sh*t

There's no escaping the box I'm in
I don't wanna go through this again
Over and over as if there's no end
Never had a place with a friend

Now I lay me down to a never-ending sleep
I pray to God my unforgiving soul to keep
This cycle runs through my head
Giving me a lot of dread

There's no escaping the box I'm in
I don't wanna go through this again
Over and over as if there's no end
Never had a place with a friend

No one can save me from my own self
So they better go do something else
I don't deserve any goodbyes
And I don't deserve any cries

There's no escaping the box I'm in
I don't wanna go through this again
Over and over as if there's no end
Never had a place with a friend

As I stand upon this small rail
I hope that I don't go to Hell
Feeling so free as I fall
Hoping I don't live at all

There's no escaping the box I'm in
I don't wanna go through this again
Over and over as if there's no end
Never had a place with a friend

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Jet
 Posted: Aug 25 2009, 05:00 PM
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QUOTE (Makuna @ August 25, 2009 08:06 am)
Now I lay me down to a never-ending sleep
I pray to God my unforgiving soul to keep

James Hetfield and whoever wrote the original children's poem would like to speak to you.
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Makuna
 Posted: Aug 25 2009, 06:07 PM
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who are they and what do you mean?

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Jet
 Posted: Aug 25 2009, 06:34 PM
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QUOTE (Makuna @ August 25, 2009 02:07 pm)
who are they and what do you mean?

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Now I lay me down to sleep
Pray the lord my soul to keep


Lyrics from Enter Sandman, which was a reference to a children's poem. There's no way that could have been unintentional.
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Makuna
 Posted: Aug 25 2009, 06:47 PM
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OMG ITS A FRICKEN PRAYER!!! I SAY IT EVERY TIME I GO TO SLEEP YOU RETARD.

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 Posted: Aug 25 2009, 06:57 PM
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QUOTE (Makuna @ August 25, 2009 02:47 pm)
OMG ITS A FRICKEN PRAYER!!! I SAY IT EVERY TIME I GO TO SLEEP YOU RETARD.

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Ansem555
 Posted: Aug 25 2009, 07:10 PM
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QUOTE (Jet @ August 25, 2009 05:57 pm)
QUOTE (Makuna @ August 25, 2009 02:47 pm)
OMG ITS A FRICKEN PRAYER!!! I SAY IT EVERY TIME I GO TO SLEEP YOU RETARD.

Oh. Children's prayer. Read that wrong.

Kind of strange to use a children's prayer in a poem that you claimed to be "suicidal".

Must you point out only the flaws in no matter what you see? You can never enjoy something for what it is, the only joy you get out of anything is pointing out what's wrong with it in your eyes. Now then, if you don't mind stop pointing out the flaws in everything and give actual comments. If you have anything to say to me, PM me. Any other comment involving this will be deleted.

I like the poem. The suicidal factor in it kinda gives it it's edge. The emotion for the writing is very good and well placed.

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Ansem555
 Posted: Aug 25 2009, 07:24 PM
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QUOTE (Ansem555 @ August 25, 2009 06:10 pm)
QUOTE (Jet @ August 25, 2009 05:57 pm)
QUOTE (Makuna @ August 25, 2009 02:47 pm)
OMG ITS A FRICKEN PRAYER!!! I SAY IT EVERY TIME I GO TO SLEEP YOU RETARD.

Oh. Children's prayer. Read that wrong.

Kind of strange to use a children's prayer in a poem that you claimed to be "suicidal".

Must you point out only the flaws in no matter what you see? You can never enjoy something for what it is, the only joy you get out of anything is pointing out what's wrong with it in your eyes. Now then, if you don't mind stop pointing out the flaws in everything and give actual comments. If you have anything to say to me, PM me. Any other comment involving this will be deleted.

I like the poem. The suicidal factor in it kinda gives it it's edge. The emotion for the writing is very good and well placed.

What part of that did you not understand?

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Makuna
 Posted: Aug 26 2009, 12:21 AM
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O_O I feel sad for my poem, it got like spammed

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Makuna
 Posted: Aug 26 2009, 07:57 PM
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I've just realized how real to meh own feelings this poem is...And I was kinda just writing to rhyme...I'm pshyic to meh own self O_O

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