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> Hikau (?) Explosion, I'm just trying to mix up my style a bit
Makuna
 Posted: Jul 23 2009, 07:07 PM
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Well I know how you all love my little commentary on my own poems, so please try to contain your excitement. XD. Well for this poem I though I should change my style so I did it in hikaus, I don't remember how to spell it XD. Yeah and the style to hikaus are in the syllables, which is 7, 5, 7.

Hikau (?) Explosion

In my heart this love does stay
More than you will know
I know it won't go away

You're the best thing in my world
You know I love you
Though I'm just a simple girl

I write my poems just for you
You are my otter
I love everything you do

You're the best thing in my world
You know I love you
Though I'm just a simple girl

Though right now I'm just confused
You must love me too
'Cause I know I won't be used

You're the best thing in my world
You know I love you
Though I'm just a simple girl

When I am thinking of you
My heart skips a beat
And I forget all I knew

You're the best thing in my world
You know I love you
Though I'm just a simple girl


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You take a star and lead it far away and the star will be lost as I am without you.
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