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> my first drawing
 Posted: May 27 2010, 11:38 PM
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i made a character a while back. i drew him a few days ago in pain and i'm wondering what you gus thinkT

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 Posted: May 30 2010, 03:24 PM
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I am the Taggerung, German Shepherd style!

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Could use some work, but it looks pretty good for a first attempt.

What you could fix:
Erase lines that aren't in use, like the ones in the legs.
Connect lines, like on the hands.
Avoid the spraycan tool, it is not friendly with images with boundaries.
Make sure to bold on top of the lines, I see a lot of lines that aren't bolded or are and not even on the lines they are supposed to bold.
Try to keep in the lines, color carefully.

That's just me, but I can't draw worth crap. Still, I think those factors will help. Try again using those tips, and it may come out better.

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